Score: 7

"Spontaneous and random humour an go two ways..."

submission: Irod Bad!

date: May 9, 2008

I liked it. I admit, I found it a little amusing. But there comes a point when the mental voice acting, and the sometimes less-than-average drawings get a little annoying.

However, overall, I think this is pretty decent. I didn't laugh out loud, but my ears didn't bleed either, so you must have done something right.

3/5

Score: 8

"This is worth watching for the artwork alone."

submission: crossroads in the sky

date: May 9, 2008

Beautiful, crisp, sharp animation and artwork, beautifully done, and I felt sure the moment I started watching it I would give it a '10'.

But I didn't. Why? Because the storyline was too strange. It wasn't a bad idea, but the execution was slightly off, and I don't think it completely portrayed the message you were trying to get across. This, in addition to the somewhat emotionless voice acting, made what was a logical message seem completely illogical. Using the birds to depict this was unique, but if the voice acting and animation aren't completely harmonious - as is the case to a certain extent here - then it just goes back to being two birds flying, with a weird voice over in the background.

So, main point - more emotion in your voice acting. Nice work, anyway.

4/5

Score: 5

"I would use the term 'enjoyable' very loosely."

submission: Enjoyable Horse Racing

date: May 8, 2008

It was a little hard to understand at first, but I suppose you pick that up. As for the actual game itself...

I don't think the concept is what many people would consider 'fun'. I just don't see this working well. Also, the whole interface was a little boring, and the watching of the horse race just seemed like a bit of a pointless addition, really.

It's not terrible, but there is definitely room for improvement.

2/5

Score: 10

"Amazing..."

submission: ~Silver Memory~ -hania

date: December 23, 2007

The only thing I can fault is that it is in a loop, and cuts off a little at the end. Perhaps it could fade out, to be in keeping with the rest of the song?

Anyway, virtually perfect. It sounded so real, it was breathtaking...

Please, keep on doing all of this. You'll go far.

Score: 8

"There's only one problem in my opinion"

submission: Innocence {Trance Mix)

date: October 23, 2007

I really liked the tune
But you randomly changed the style a little bit 28 seconds in, then brought it back. You could have done it a little more subtle.

Score: 9

"Why would you want to improve it?"

submission: [W] Nothing else matters

date: October 23, 2007

The only thing you could do to make that any better is make it longer! I wanted more!
But really, it was very good.
4/5